User:Saratayl/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Pesaro Madonna

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

Pesaro Madonna is a beautiful altarpiece installation. The most important religious figures, the Virgin Mary and Jesus Christ, are off-centered; at first this may seem like an odd decision. But, what Titian has done is given viewers the illusion of being able to walk up to the Virgin Mary and Christ. I think it is a unique take on a traditional topic.

Evaluate the article
The visual analysis of the painting is very thorough. However, throughout the article I see sentences that are grammatically awkward and excessively wordy. The image included is of a replica; an image of the originally should ideally be used. The sources leave some to be desired. Two major sources are Khan Academy videos and there is a lack of peer reviewed sources.