User:Saratayl/Pesaro Madonna/Teniad Peer Review

General info
Saratayl
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Saratayl/Pesaro Madonna
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Pesaro Madonna

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer review of Pesaro Madonna painting

- The draft contains relevant information to the painting and has some good sources.

- The draft also seems to abbreviate the information in the article, which I think is helpful as the article contains some unnecessary paragraphs and information in general, but there doesn't seem to be much addition to the information. The same can be said about sources. It might be helpful to research what you can about the painting and artist to help you think of what can be added.

- Something you could add is the relevance of the painting to Titian's artistry and its relevance to Venetian art as a whole.

- All-in-all a good draft, you just might want to think about possible additions.