User:Sarita3940/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Pamela Sunstrum
 * Content is relevant yet limited. The professional career section can be sectioned into her different works, like installations, animations, writings, and drawings and paintings. It says she is based in South Africa, but on her website she mentions alternating between there and Ontario, Canada. I believe there are missing exhibits and they can also be separated into being single person, two person, selected exhibits, and performances. The article could definitely use more content.
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Option 2

 * Alison Saar
 * Need main picture of herself for side bar summary box. Current exhibits or her current residency not mentioned. Could use organizing of different art works according to their forms such as sculpture, print, etc. and then detail about each.
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Option 3

 * Ambreen Butt
 * The article has relevant information, but it is limited. It could use organizing and better detail about her different exhibits as well as explanation of medias and exactly how she uses them.
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Option 4

 * Jenny Holzer
 * The works section could be organized better and the overall article. Early life and personal life section can be put together because it is awkward at end. Add a influences and style section? Exhibits could be listed out so it is easier to read
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Option 5

 * Gerda Wegener
 * Needs more citing throughout article, especially early life and later life and death section. More works need to be mentioned and described. There is a lack of that. Works section. Really weak article considering the amount of visits it gets.
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