User:SarpreetDhillon/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
List of Canadian Victoria Cross recipients - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The reason why I chose this article is because I really wanted to look at the Canadian Military task force and see how the Canadian military did during the wars. I did not know of the Wikipedia Projects as Wikipedia is something that I have been told to stay away from. I decided to evaluate the List of Canadian Victorian Cross recipients.

Evaluate the article
Most of the links connect me to the webpages that have been used for the resources to explain the involvements of the Canadian military throughout the different wars. One article that really caught my eye was the "Black Friday" of 1945 and the List of Canadians that received the Victorian Cross for their efforts in the war. The page itself has no lead, which I think the page can benefit from having a lead. Most of the sources that are used connect to a webpage. The lead does a great job with explaining what Victorian Cross is as it hooks the reader in. The article is neutral and unbiased, however, the article is a bit dry and needs to be more engaging.