User:Sarsh262/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor: This is the article I will be evaluating

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have decided to evaluate Andy Schor’s Wikipedia page due to the lack of thorough information as to a public mayoral figure. There is a lack of formation as is early education and even the extent to his career moments.

Evaluate the article
There seems to be a lack of background information being presented throughout the article, especially considering his education and early moments. Regarding the content, it is not as detailed in regards to the information being presented. And instead focuses on very basic information without regards of icing deeper into the content. There is also only one image of Schor in the entire wiki article, this creates an isolation of the mayor from public life and does not show case Schor in any other types of environments. There are a few references for the little information actually being presented throughout the article, it would make more sense for there to be more references in regards to the information. The tone, is very natural and does not imply or infer and differing ideals and instead presents information in a straightforward neautral manner. There are only two tabs for reference, and so there isn’t much to judge on a organization manner, considering the lack of information actually being presented.