User:Sasharoach/Bluey (long-lived dog)/Isdewell Peer Review

General info
Sasha Roach
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sasharoach/Bluey (long-lived dog)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bluey (long-lived dog) :

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * It appears that the lead has been reorganized.
 * The Lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic.
 * The Lead includes a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * The Lead does not include information that is not present in the article.
 * The Lead is concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is relevant to the topic.
 * The content added up-to-date.
 * While there isn't any content that does not belong, there appears to be some missing content.
 * The article does not deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps or address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is neutral.
 * There are not any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position.
 * There are no viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented.
 * The content added does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * New content appears to be backed up by a reliable secondary source of information.
 * The content accurately reflects what the cited sources say.
 * There could be more diverse sources.
 * Sources are not particularly current.
 * The sources are not written by a diverse spectrum of authors. They do not include historically marginalized individuals.
 * There are very minimal sources available on this topic that have not already been used.
 * Links appear to wor,

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Added content is concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * No grammatical or spelling errors in the added content.
 * The content added well-organized.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * My peer did not add images or media.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * There could certainly be more content added. I can see, though, that it would be difficult to find additional information on such a niche topic.
 * The content added is concise and relevent to the topic, which is good.
 * The content could be improved by providing additional context or diverse information.