User:Sasoroma1/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: 1GOAL Education for All
 * Article Evaluation
 * 1.the lead is concise and clear but the article is not organized to sections ( no headings ).
 * 2. there is an unnecessary quotation could be paraphrased.
 * 3. The article is not up to date because one of the sources is no longer available.
 * 4. another source is not reliable (newspaper article)  :
 * Sources:
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Option 2

 * Article titleActive learning:
 * Article Evaluation 1. the lead section is overly detailed.
 * 2. the article contained unnecessary quotation even in the lead.
 * 3. Vague words like ( many studies), It is suggested. without saying by who? which is affect the article creditability.
 * 4. Images included is not sufficient.
 * Sources:
 * Sources:

Option 3

 * Article title: Mammal Species of the World:
 * Article Evaluation: 1. the article needs an update
 * 2. more references should be added.
 * 3. more sections should be added based on reliable resources. :
 * Sources:

Option 4

 * Article title: Alligator leather:
 * Article Evaluation: The lead has an introductory section and it is concise but it does not have a description for all the major sections like health complications and environmental impact. The article content is partially relevant because the lead nothing mentioned about the major side effects of tanning. Also, I think that more information should be added like tanning the leather in another country and the effect on the crocodile habitat due to hunting. I think the article is unbalanced because the claim about the negative environmental and health impact of tanning is addressed in the last two sections while there is no claim for safer tanning process or another country is done the same process and avoided these major health complications. I think the article is persuading the reader to avoid crocodile leather. The article is clear, easy to read and concise. Also, It is broken to section. In the talk page they suggested moving the health complication and environmental impact to another articles but I disagree because the readers should know about these side effects and benefits of using crocodile leather. " According to a report in 2001 estimate" in the last section I was not able to find who wrote that report or where is the report, so I think this part could be improved. I found 2 sources from news blog. :
 * Sources:

Option 5

 * Article title: Thousand Lights Mosque:
 * Article Evaluation 1. incomplete article
 * 2. resources should be added
 * Sources
 * Option 6
 * Article title: Pastry chef
 * Article Evaluation: 1. Citation needed 2. examples of famous Pastry chef or famous desserts. 3. more images :
 * Article Evaluation: 1. Citation needed 2. examples of famous Pastry chef or famous desserts. 3. more images :