User:Savannah35/Blood quantum laws/Bsb018 Peer Review

General info
Savannah35
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Savannah35/Blood quantum laws
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Blood quantum laws

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * Lead was well written and easy to understand the purpose of the article.

Sources and References


 * need more sources in some areas.

Overall Impressions


 * well written and well described stayed on topic well and isn't all over the place.

Organization


 * few minor grammar errors