User:Savannah Leach/Tokujin Yoshioka/CowboyThor1712 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Savannah Leach


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Savannah%20Leach/Tokujin_Yoshioka?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tokujin Yoshioka

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I know you necessarily haven't done a lot yet in terms of actually adding to your article, but from what you've done so far, I can see you're definitely planning on going in and adding some more info on his popular works. I think that's a good idea, and make sure to get into some of the details that are most important.