User:Savannahcallie/Obesity and the environment/Dtm016 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Savannahcallie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Savannahcallie/Obesity_and_the_environment?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Obesity and the environment

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content that has been added is relevant and up to date for the topic. The lead has been updated to reflect the changes that the editor added. The content that was added is neutral and well- written and easy to read. The only problem that I am seeing with the information that was added is the fact that there are no sources with the information. Where did this information come from and is it from a reliable source? But other than that, I think the information added did improve the quality of the lead section.