User:Savannahcallie/Obesity and the environment/Littlefix21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SavannahCallie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Savannahcallie/Obesity and the environment


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Obesity and the environment

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Be sure to add sources. Looks like there were some in the original but they were accidentally deleted in the edit.

- For stuff like "School Lunch Act" and "Child Nutrition Act" maybe link those to the other Wikipedia pages that correspond to those (if they have any). I know you did not add those to the article but it would be a great way to expand upon it.

- Looks like the major edit was the last two sentences which are great factual statements, just be sure to add a source to back it up.

- Overall tone of knowledge is great and seems to have a clear understanding of the subject.