User:Savannaj13/Cannabinol/Bdlogan90 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Savannaj13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Savannaj13/Cannabinol?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cannabinol

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe that this is a great article to review because there is much room for improvement. When I say improvement I could also interchange the word with addition. That's why this article has potential. It is dealing with a fairly new subject matter in today's society. Although CBD or Cannabidiol is becoming more popular in society every where you turn along with Delta-8 and Delta-9 amongst other phytocannabinoids. The chosen subject in this article cannabinol is one that most people probably haven't heard of very often being shortened for CBN. That's where I believe the key lies in drafting this article. If it had extensive information in it then you could focus more on taking away info versus adding it. It honestly makes your job easier because you can focus on what you can add to help the readers understand CBN better. By the time they finish reading your draft they should be able to feel like they understand and know what CBN is more clearly. When I started reading the article I didn't realize there was so many variations of Cannabinoids. The article has good bones that you can flesh out more. Due to a lot of single sentences and small paragraphs being used again it leaves opportunity for new additions. The lead is pretty clear to me and leads into the other sections properly. The order of formation, pharmacology, chemistry, legal status and United Stated are good sub topics for the article. So since your foundation seems to be pretty stable I would focus more on adding content instead of trying to create completely new content. However, the good news is you really can do both. Due to the short paragraphs present under the different sub topics you have a lot of wiggle room. I hope you enjoy continuing to add to this article.