User:Savannaj13/Cannabinol/Shivamp1999 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Savannaj13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Savannaj13/Cannabinol?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cannabinol

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hey Savanna,

Some minor tweaks that I would that recommend to your sandbox would be:


 * Your beginning statement is a run on sentence. I would suggest breaking it up to make it flow better. I would also try to replace the word maybe with something more concrete since you found it in a peer reviewed article.
 * Cannabinoid compound cannabidol (CBD) maybe beneficial in treating patients with diagnosed psychosis. This compound maybe a promising new tool for mental health providers.
 * As Dr. Rahn stated, I would recommend bringing part of the actual article into your sandbox to make it more cohesive to where you will be adding your sentence contribution.
 * You have two other references that you could still use to add more information.
 * Your reference is incorrect. I believe that the DOI is incorrect.
 * I also believe that you are straying away from the topic cannabinol and talking more about CBD.

~ Shivamp1999, June 16th, 2022 4:10:23 AM