User:Savoryyyy/Birken Forest Buddhist Monastery/Beabeets Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Savoryyyy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:Savoryyyy/Birken Forest Buddhist Monastery
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Savoryyyy/Birken_Forest_Buddhist_Monastery?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):
 * Birken Forest Buddhist Monastery
 * Birken Forest Buddhist Monastery

I think this is a very well-written, appropriately neutral addition to the article! The information you added was concise and very clear. The original article was missing sufficient information on the day to day life and workings of the people who live at the monastery so your addition was very helpful in improving that area of weakness. One important thing your writing could improve on is adding proper in-text citations and making sure there is a variety of sources. You have a nicely cited separate reference at the end of your sandbox but it's not incorporated into the wikipedia in-text citation system and its only a singular source.