User:Savsleev/Rogers v. American Airlines (1981)/Ohmizzoutigers Peer Review

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RaeStecker


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 * User:Savsleev/Rogers v. American Airlines (1981)/Bibliography
 * User:Savsleev/Rogers v. American Airlines (1981)
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 * Does not exist

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was a great way to introduce the case, and I loved how you used a source that covered the case from an intersectional point of view. It was straight forward and provided the most crucial information for an introduction. I also thought the content was great, and I liked the way you broke down the case in different aspects in the Bibliography. I also think it was important that you listed the public reaction as well, since this case brought about specific resolutions. As a new article, I think it completely covers WikiEd guidelines, as it offers multiple, credible sources and a structure that is identical to a veteran Wiki article. I'm excited to see the completed article, and I think it's an awesome addition to Wikipedia!