User:SavvyWriter58/Phonics/Litstudent Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SavvyWriter58


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SavvyWriter58/Phonics?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phonics
 * Phonics

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Great first sentence. It was a clear definition of analytic phonics and you cited the source

Suggestions:


 * create a sub heading. I think your focus is analytic phonics. Adding a sub heading would make that clear
 * more details
 * at least 6 more sources