User:Sawyerbrady44/Survivor guilt/AngelOffley Peer Review

General info
Sawyerbrady44
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sawyerbrady44/Survivor guilt
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Survivor guilt

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

I believe the lead still needs to be updated and should define survivor's guilt and provide a brief overview. You could start with something like, "Survivor's guilt is a mental condition that occurs when a person believes they have done something wrong by surviving a traumatic event when others did not." I would also make sure it's concise and introduces the main sections of the article.

Content and Sources/References

The content is relevant but very brief. It’s good that you mention the connection to PTSD because it provides clear context! I would expand on this by describing what survivor's guilt entails, common symptoms, and how it differs from or overlaps with PTSD. It would also be beneficial to give examples of situations where survivor's guilt might occur, such as natural disasters, accidents, or combat. These are just some ideas though!

Tone and Balance

The tone is neutral, which is good! When discussing symptoms and treatment, I recommend presenting that information factually and objectively. If you mention specific therapies or coping mechanisms, ensure they are described based on evidence without promoting one over others, which could be tricky.

Organization

Organization is pretty important when it comes to the draft. I would start with a clear definition and overview of survivor's guilt. I would then follow this with sections on symptoms, causes, relationship to PTSD, and treatment options.

Images and Media

If you were to add images, I would add images or diagrams that illustrate concepts, such as the psychological impact of survivor's guilt or flowcharts of symptoms and treatment approaches. Having these visual aids can help make the article more engaging and easier to understand!