User:Sawyerbrady44/Survivor guilt/Makylam18 Peer Review

General info
Sawyer - @Sawyerbrady44
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sawyerbrady44/Survivor guilt:Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Survivor guilt

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was not a substantial amount of work in the sandbox to conduct a full peer review so I drafted up some suggestions on how you could continue to change your article. Starting with the bibliography page, you can find more sources that have information on survivors guilt and PTSD. You could add more peer reviewed articles and possibly articles that contain data or evidence based information that can back up information for your topic. To add to this article, you could expand more on survivor's guilt and the symptoms of it. I also noticed that there weren't any plans of treatment listed on the article so you could add treatment plans or ways to manage this disorder. I would also suggest fact checking the history section and the examples section to ensure that the information given is correct.