User:Sb00714/Casearia tomentosa/Dylanc9918 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Sb00714


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sb00714/Casearia tomentosa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Casearia tomentosa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Casearia tomentosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
Tons of great changes here

Super easy to follow I love the additions with the description for leaves, fruit, and flowers.

For geological distribution I wonder if this sentence "It is vulnerbable and susceptibe to infection from a number of pathogens which include incests, powdery mildew, and mold." wouldnt be more appropriate elsewhere? Seems out of place in the habitat subheading and I also noticed that it is full of grammatical errors

For medicinal properties

"In mice testing, the extracted plant compounds did not show toxicity, behavioural changes, or death at levels up to 400 mg to kg of body weight. In mice testing, doses of 100-400 mg per kg showed reduction in blood glucose levels." I wonder if it is appropriate to have this line here? I would be wary of using the results of just one study as a piece of information. It kinda feels like this sentence could be left out all together or maybe tied into some larger question if there actually is toxicity in the plant?

Overall I think the additions were great, the article was very bare bones before and I thought you did a great job really flushing it out with important details. I think some grammatical errors still need to be polished up, but overall the changes look very nice. Good amount of citations as well