User:Sb871423/Kyungah Ham/Fiondion Peer Review

Lead

Yes, the lead has been updated.

A small intro sentence was provided.

No, the lead is more of a small intro into the rest of the article.

No, it has similar information.

It is concise but could have more.

Content

Yes, the content added is relevant to the overall topic

Yes, the information is seen as up to date

I feel like all the information important and needed in the article

It talks about women being underrepresented.

Tone and Balance

Yes, the content is neutral and not biased

I don't see any claims that seem biased in any sense.

I believe that all points are represented equally

I think that the tone is neutral and is not making any reader sway in one direction vs the other

Sources and Reference

I cannot access the sources to be able to check their reliability

I cannot confirm whether or not.

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I cannot tell

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There are no links and I tried to look it up but I cannot access the sources

Organization

It is well written so far and easy to read

I cannot find too many errors, just a couple of grammatical mistakes.

I really like how organized this article is, it is broken down easily.

Images and Media

It seems that an image may have been attempted to be added but I cannot see it.

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N'A

New Articles

Yes, it does apply but I cannot tell if the new sources work or not.

I cannot access to be able to tell

Yes it follows the same layout of other Wikipedia articles

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Overall Impressions

Yes, the content added is perfect for the beginning of a new article

The strengths are being precise and straight to the point

Just adding more information and more sources.

General info

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