User:Sb871423/Kyungah Ham/Ziggy9alm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sb871423


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sb871423/Kyungah_Ham?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead/Biography:
Very straight to the point and direct. Remember to put the artist's surname before her first name (Ham Kyungah)... and also try to add the Korean version of her name in Hangul, I believe it would look like this: 햄경아

Organization/Structure:
I would move to Personal Life section closer to the Early Life section and maybe even merge them. Talk about her current life and her history before her work. Let the audience learn who she is beforehand so they can understand how her life and experiences may influence her work.

Balance:
Good balance. Maybe think about adding pictures of her pieces along with the projects you discuss.

Neutral Content:
The content is perfectly neutral

Reliable Sources:
Sources seem reliable - consider adding hyperlinks to some things such as her artwork and places mentioned

Images and Media:
Including images would be very helpful. Add a picture of the artist herself and some of her pieces.

Overall:
Overall, this is a very good start. There seems to be a fair amount of information about her out there. All I'd say is add some hyperlinks, pictures, and move a few things around. Good first draft!