User:Sbec139/Pitt shag/Csahnow Peer Review

General info
Sbec139
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sbec139/Pitt shag
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Pitt shag

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good start! Something to add that might be helpful is where the Pitt Island is geographically, and with that you could talk about the climate and habitats there.

Expansion of the history of the bird under status and conservation could also be helpful. You also have a good neutral tone and a nice framework for your page