User:Sbisho/Devil's Lair/Chattrrboxx Peer Review

Technology

An image of one of those tools would help differentiate them more clearly.

Charcoal

"Once dated" not needed as "identified" was used in previous sentences.

Lithic Analysis

Sentence number three was long and wordy. Try to divide the theory and facts separately.

Human material

"...tooth." (missing a period)

"Bones" replaced with "human remains" since no animal bones were included in your paragraph.

Additional Notes

The evidence from your included articles is well formatted and is clearly articulated. Well done.