User:Sbisho/Devil's Lair/Edwwards Peer Review

General info
Sbisho
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Looks like there isn't one yet but I can review the bibliography and proposed changes.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Devil's Lair

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking at the bibliography I see some very good readings that I think will provide excellent information for the proposed article additions. I agree that the grammar and syntax needs some adjusting, especially in the Excavations section. The language is awkward and clunky. I was confused reading it. Considering that Devil's Lair is an archaeological site, the Archaeological Significance section is very very tiny. I think there will be no issue in adding in relevant archaeological information with the sources chosen. There are only three sections in this article so I think it is a good idea to add more sections or edit the current ones to make it more organized. Perhaps there could be sections on artifacts found in the cave since the article says that they exist but doesn't specifically talk about them.