User:Sbisho/Devil's Lair/Evkmpn Peer Review

General info
Sbisho
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sbisho/Devil's Lair
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Devil's Lair

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall, your work is reminiscent of the content that I would want to add to the Devil's Lair article, myself. Each of your sections provided a succinct summary of the findings from your sources. These sections were all about the same length, which is good because it showed that they were of equal importance to you (no topic biases). The language used was neutral, as it would have been understandably difficult to incorporate underrepresented (Aboriginal) perspectives in your work. Your sources are solid but are on the older side, so I'm curious to see if there are any more recent sources that are relevant to your topic. So far, your work looks great, especially in terms of writing style and content. I would only recommend including some more recent sources if you're able and to included some of your work (involving dating) in the article's lead so that more people will recognize your work! I'm looking forward to seeing the final result!