User:Sbradford1149/UFO: Extraterrestrials/JoJo Miranda Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sbradford1149


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Sbradford1149/UFO: Extraterrestrials - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * UFO: Extraterrestrials - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead is easy to read and structured good. The description was enough for anyone to understand what the game is about even if they haven't heard of that game. It's concise and straightforward. ￼

I would just try to see why some words have the red line under them and have it erased so it looks cleaner. ￼