User:Sbuckendorf/Ames Monument/Rward9 Peer Review

Hello Sbuckendorf,

First off I really enjoyed the topic you wrote about. The Ames Monument is a fairly local site that many people don't know about and I just really want to applaud your topic. I think that the content you added was insightful but there wasn't very much information. I would have liked to have seen a bit more contributed to this topic. You used good sources with lots of good information that could've been implemented a bit more, but the content that you did add helps the viewer understand the Ames Monument better. My biggest suggestion to you is to just go back through and proof read what you wrote because there are a decent amount of grammatical errors. Other than those few critiques, great job on your project.

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