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Content
The Sector Collapse article contains three sections, a lead section, an examples section, and a references section. The lead section contains a brief definition of Sector Collapse and 5 wiki links to other volcanology articles. The definition could use some more clarity, specifically the "intervention of new magma" part. The lead section could also be lengthened to include an overview of the existing following sections and those that will be added. The examples section lists three historic sector collapse events. These examples are slightly vague and need more details. For example, the last example doesn't even mention which volcano in Nicaragua was involved in the sector collapse. Additionally, there are no pictures in the article.

Tone
The tone of the article is informational but wordy. There are many places where the writing could be more concise or the wording is odd. For example, "Occurring on many volcanoes" and "It occurred to to an earthquake that was a result of the eruption". Despite this, the tone is accessible to a non-scientific reader.

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