User:Scarysnake/Battle of Matewan/Se2032 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Scarysnake)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Scarysnake/Battle of Matewan


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Battle of Matewan

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: Based on your draft, I feel that you made some essential notes.

Content: Though you made notes and your original article has a fair amount of information, it seems you were unable to find much new information. You added some notes on what wanted to include, but gave no sources.

Tone and Balance: With no added content in your draft, I am unsure of where you are trying to go.

Sources and References: Need to make additions to.

Organization: I agree your notes and suggestion for images. It would have been nice to see what you would be adding.

Overall Impressions: I feel like you could add more than what you already plan to add. For example, you could add onto the information about the "Town of Matewan" and "The Battle". I don't feel that the history was sufficient in the original article and you could make great edits to this area.