User:Schimerine/Female education/Joshkaneff Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your revie

General info

 * I am reviewing Sydnie Chimerine article about Female Education
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_education

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * No, Sydnie did not update the lead.
 * Sydnie should have updated the lead. The lead does include an introductory sentence that concisely describes the article's topic, but it is way too long. The lead can easily be broken up into multiple sections - it is not concise and overly detailed.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Yes, the content added is relevant, and up-to-date.
 * I am unaware of any content missing and did not see any content that does not belong.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The content Sydnie added is neutral.
 * There are no claims that add heavily biased toward a particular position.
 * The content added does not attempt to persuade the reader in any direction

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * The content Sydnie added is backed up by a reliable source of information.
 * The sources added are thorough and current. The links do work.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * The content is well-written with no grammatical or spelling errors. It is well organized as well.
 * The content added does not have any spelling errors or grammatical mistakes.



Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Yes the content Sydnie added enhanced the article has a whole.
 * The strengths that Sydnie added were reliable sources that makes the reader trust the facts.
 * Sydnie can improve this article by organizing the content more.