User:Schlichting11703/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Conceptual Architecture

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is in the vein of Architectural History and relevant to the class I am taking. I assumed it was about building and creating architecture in relation to art or design.

Evaluate the article
Overall, this is a successful article. There is a clear topic that is described well in the first sentence, the tone is even and clear throughout the whole piece, and it is organized well and linearly. There sources are reliable, although they did use a magazine as a primary source (Harvard Design Magazine). There are no images or media linking on the page. The article is written well, however including some more definitions to clear up any confusion about the topic may be helpful. For example, the author used the term "'architect as a master-builder' model" with no explanation as to what that may be.