User:Schu4379/Snow algae/AvOsero Peer Review

I may not be seeing your edits correctly, but it appears that there isn't any. Instead of a "normal peer review", I will give you suggestions on how to start editing this article.

Overall I think the lead is well written, as it has a neutral and unbiased voice. I think there is enough information to serve as a summary, however I do not know a lot about snow algae so there could be a lot of information that I missing that I do not know exists.

I think in the article body you could make "subtopics" explaining the different variations on snow algae. Such as different colors, why they are different colors, where they are found, what causes the variation, etc. Another idea is to add a section on the survivability due to climate change and other environmental factors that are happening in the world. You could make this in to a new section labeled "biogeochemical impacts". What does snow algae do to the earth, why is it important, or how is it being effected by increasing CO2 levels in the atmosphere?

I think since this article does not have a lot of prior information your ideas are endless. I hope my suggestions help guide you in your writing and I look forward to seeing more!

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