User:Schug068/U.S. Women's National Soccer Team pay discrimination claim/Bistr012 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Schug068


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Schug068/U.S._Women's_National_Soccer_Team_pay_discrimination_claim?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * U.S. women's national soccer team pay discrimination claim

Evaluate the drafted changes
Information is explained clearly and makes sense to the reader. Improvements are made from the original article and provide a good expansion on the subject. More sections could be added that tie the topic back to feminist theory, however. Images could be included to support the information.