User:Schug068/U.S. Women's National Soccer Team pay discrimination claim/Kizzardly Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Schug068/U.S. Women's National Soccer Team pay discrimination claim


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Schug068/U.S._Women's_National_Soccer_Team_pay_discrimination_claim?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * U.S. women's national soccer team pay discrimination claim
 * U.S. women's national soccer team pay discrimination claim

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You guys have picked a really interesting topic! As of right now I cannot see anything in your sandbox, but let me know if that is an issue on my end. In terms of the original article, the content is good but it seems as though there is a lot of information that could be added. The information about the reactions could likely be expanded upon. I'm sure that there were more public reactions than just a statement from Joe Biden. The effects of the lawsuit could also be added, like if it had any effects on other teams or on women's sports in general. More categories could definitely be added other than just the intro, complaint, and reactions. There are lots of good sources for the original article and all of the links work. The video that is linked is also good and works well as a picture for the article. The content is also well written and clear and seems to be unbiased.