User:Schug068/U.S. Women's National Soccer Team pay discrimination claim/MegMarie13 Peer Review

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US womens soccer national team discrimination claim


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 * U.S. women's national soccer team pay discrimination claim

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the lead changes to make it more condensed. There was a lot of unnecessary information in the original article. The history section is really important in a wikipedia article, so it's nice that you not only added that section, but you really flushed it out. I also like how you moved information from the lead into the history section where it belongs. Adding in more reactions instead of taking the whole section out was nice, since there was not a lot under the heading before you changed it.