User:Schultry/Triangle Lake Round Barn/LIUOSU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ryan Schultz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Schultry/Triangle_Lake_Round_Barn?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Triangle Lake Round Barn

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Hi Ryan,

It is a nice draft and thanks for revealing the whole story behind a single barn. You clearly divide your content into four parts: general introduction, story about the construction, its design and restoration. I think all sources you choose are reliable and the work's tone is definitely neutral. It is very intriguing to learn that there was no round barn in Oregon before its construction. Generally it is an interesting topic, involving farming and construction industry in old Oregon state.

My advice is that perhaps the paragraph of "Design" can be added to "John P. Sumich and Construction" rather that being a single part. I appreciate that you add enough information about John P. Sumich himself as the promoter and constructor. You also mention the local support from Oregonians, which makes your work more informative. To be more comprehensive, I believe any image about the barn since 1949 and picture of Sumich could be a great option to support your content. And I am also curious if anything happened from 2016 when the owner started to raise money to 2021, and if the process of raising funds is going sweetly?