User:Schw1890/Plastic pollution/Mconowall Peer Review

This was already a highly developed article and I like how you found a new section to add to it, with plenty of new references. I'm impressed with how much you wrote while maintaining high quality writing. Overall, you did a great job staying pretty neutral in your tone and the organization is solid. There are some parts where I think your writing could be more concise and some works could be cut out or switched for another word to keep the neutral, informative tone that wikipedia pages generally have. However, you generally still did a very good job with this. Also, great job using current and reliable references - mostly using peer reviewed articles.

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