User:Schwammy1/Spoiler (media)/Ks20ga Peer Review

In this article, the layout of the information provided allows the reader to easily identify different sections regarding the topic of spoilers. I believe the “Lead” section of the article summarizes spoilers with a beneficial amount of information that gives the reader a direct definition.

As a reader, I would like to learn more about the history of spoilers and possibly an expansion of information in this section. The movie, Star Trek, is very well-known, however, possibly including a more relevant movie will allow readers to obtain the concepts more. The history section also includes a statement that says, “Wikipedia used to give spoiler warnings before 2006 but stopped, leading to complaints when it revealed endings in articles. Social media made it harder to avoid spoilers, leading to increased use of warnings.” It would be interesting to include more about certain websites and apps that provide spoiler warnings with the constant use of social media.

I was intrigued by the identification of spoilers in different mediums. With the constant changes in technology and media, I think it was an important and beneficial aspect to include in this article.

In the section in regards to Psychological effects, I believe more information can be added about the negative effects of spoilers on audiences. I think the information stated is vital, however, I would consider adding a connection to how the research can relate to readers.

Overall, this article addresses the topic of spoilers and categorizing information that allows the reader to follow accordingly.

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In this article, the layout of the information provided allows the reader to easily identify different sections regarding the topic of spoilers. I believe the “Lead” section of the article summarizes spoilers with a beneficial amount of information that gives the reader a direct definition.

As a reader, I would like to learn more about the history of spoilers and possibly an expansion of information in this section. The movie, Star Trek, is very well-known, however, possibly including a more relevant movie will allow readers to obtain the concepts more. The history section also includes a statement that says, “Wikipedia used to give spoiler warnings before 2006 but stopped, leading to complaints when it revealed endings in articles. Social media made it harder to avoid spoilers, leading to increased use of warnings.” It would be interesting to include more about certain websites and apps that provide spoiler warnings with the constant use of social media.

I was intrigued by the identification of spoilers in different mediums. With the constant changes in technology and media, I think it was an important and beneficial aspect to include in this article.

In the section in regards to Psychological effects, I believe more information can be added about the negative effects of spoilers on audiences. I think the information stated is vital, however, I would consider adding a connection to how the research can relate to readers.

Overall, this article addresses the topic of spoilers and categorizing information that allows the reader to follow accordingly.