User:Schwingp/Scotoplanes/Gomescl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Michael P Dempsey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Schwingp/Scotoplanes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scotoplanes (Links to an external site.

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

First, I would recommend making your changes Bold which would've made it easier to find. Other than that great work with adding new information. I like how your article didn't provide much information, especially regarding physiology. However, you have added a substantial amount of information and of crucial interest.

In terms of tone (as you asked), I think it flows smoothly and has a neutral but informative tone - Good Job!