User:Scienceislife22/Marine Isotope Stage 9/Micromeech Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Scienceislife22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Scienceislife22/Marine_Isotope_Stage_9?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marine Isotope Stage 9
 * Marine Isotope Stage 9

Lead
The lead contains a good overview of MIS 9 and has the appropriate amount of depth (in my opinion).

Content
The content seems up to date to to come from a variety of sources. I know this was already part of the article, but some of the European information seems out of place. I wonder if there is a way you can tie it all together? (Maybe not). I think adding to the MIS Drivers section like you mentioned will be good!

Tone and Balance
Neutral tone and well balanced

Sources and References
The sources seem diverse. I do see that it is asking you to check the date values of some references.

Organization
The organization looks good to me! You would know more than I do, but I wonder if it makes sense to make separate heading for the interstadial and stadial phases?

Images and Media
I wonder if you can point out on the image caption where the MIS9 falls within that image? That might help tie things together a bit more.

Overall Impressions
The article is well written and on the right track! I think after you finish the additions you mentioned it will be awesome :) Great work!!