User:Scienceislife22/Nitrososphaera/C.Comatus Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Scienceislife22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Scienceislife22/Nitrososphaera?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nitrososphaera

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead section feels a little disorganized, but all of the information is relevant to the article. It could be moved around to other sections and then leaves the lead section as a descriptor of the organism.
 * Possibly add a history/ origin section to discuss the details of the discovery of this organism, it sounds like an interesting story.
 * I think the information proposed in the Article Body will really add a lot to the article, so definitely add that
 * The "Ammonia Oxidizing Archaea and Green House Effect" section may need a more concise title
 * maybe change it to an environmental interactions/ impact section. It's really good info to have on there though
 * Maybe expand on why they're called Ca. N viennensis explaining why the Ca part is there