User:Scody867/Biliary endoscopic sphincterotomy/West Mich Stu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Scody867


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Scody867/Biliary_endoscopic_sphincterotomy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biliary endoscopic sphincterotomy

Evaluate the drafted changes
The new lead section has been updated and does a great job at reflecting the new content that has been added and does so initially in a concise manner. The lead appears to have some citations that could benefit from using the wikipedia citation tool, although I believe that the in-text citations could also be hyperlinked to the reference section if that is your preferred style for this article. The content of the article has been vastly expanded upon throughout the article with some partially completed sub-sections, which likely indicates future expansion before posting to the live wikipedia page. The tone of the added information is neutral and is not persuasive in nature, which is in line with the wikipedia guidelines. While there is a notable amount of higher level medical terminology, it may be challenging to use alternative wording given the topic of the article is a highly specialized medical procedure. One suggestion may be to hyperlink the terms like "cannulation" or "cannulate" to their respective wikipedia pages so aid in understanding of the article for readers who might not be familiar with that terminology. I think that the organization of the article is very well done and the information is presented in a concise and clear manner. Overall, this is a very well done article draft and the added information is a significant improvement on the existing article. I am excited to see the final draft go live.