User:Scooby7829/Psychological effects of Internet use/Rubiii1231 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You edited good information but there is just some sentences that need to improve. Like for example the sentence that start with "This article intel's...", I think it should not start like that. Or some sentences need punctuation that need to be added. Like for example in the last sentence. But overall it seems that you found some good information to start with.