User:Scorimes/sandbox

Article Evaluation

 * Starting class article
 * Talk page conversations do represent the topic; people are discussing about information added or how to improve the article
 * Can be founded biased, leaning towards one side
 * Though there are many sources, they either don’t work or can be opinionated
 * Examples can be more detailed
 * Check the sources and make sure they credible, unbiased, and work

Article Proposal and Bibliography

Article Proposal
Article: Prison reform

Article Link:User:Scorimes/sandbox/articledraft

For my Wikipedia article edit, i'm going to work on (blank) article. Here's what I plan on adding and improving.


 * Content that I plan on adding


 * Improve the structure of the article by adding sections

I decided to I will continue to edit the same article I have been working with recently. The article, Prison Reform talks about the prison and asylum reform and the establishment of the prison system in general. After viewing the article I have decided to help edit to improve the article as a whole. I have talking notes on information that should be either added into the article or possibly removed. Some information I would like to add to this article would consist of the history of the prison reform movement. Discussing more of the background of how it began an actual movement that people advocate for. Another thing I would like to work on is the sources linked to the article. When checking them, I noticed that some of them were either biased or that were outdated. So I would like to add some more updated and credible sources for the article.

Comments from Dr. Vetter
Hi Sydney, I can see you're having trouble with the proposal. These were due by the end of the day Feb. 22 (last Friday). Please email me with any questions you might have about the project and review the assignment sheet. We can talk more during our conference, but we will be a lot more productive with an actual proposal! -Dr. V

The case of Donna Strickland, a scientist whose article was deleted just months before winning the Nobel Prize, exemplifies Wikipedia's gender gap.