User:Scorimes/sandbox/articledraft

Intro
Adding "It also focuses on ensuring the reinstatement of those whose lives are impacted by crimes." to the beginning on the introduction of the page.

Examples (Advocacy Work)
Added "She has also helped with lobbying the First Step Act, reducing the federally mandated minimum prison sentences." in Kim Kardashian-West's example.

Added "Rappers Jay-Z and Meek Mill have also been advocates for prison reform, both being very outspoken about the issue. In 2019, they announced the launching of organization REFORM Alliance, who aims to reduce the number of people who are serving probation and parole sentences that are unjust. The organization was able to pledging $50 million to debut, also bring on CNN news commentator Van Jones as CEO." changing this example.

Added "His song "Folsom Prison Blues", tells the tale from the perspective of a convicted killer in prison. Named after Folsom State Prison, which is California's second oldest correctional facility. Only twelve years later, after the song was released Cash performed the song live at the prison." for the Johnny Cash example.

Adding in the history section, more information about how the movement of prison reform began and the purpose of it. Showing how it was established and discuss more of the background of how it began an actual movement that people advocate for. Talking more about the advocacy work that has been done within this country to help improve or force the issue of prison reform. But also, removing some information that particularly shouldn't be in the article because it doesn't really relate or focus on the topic of prison reform, but perhaps stirs away into something else.