User:Scorpiohistory/Pasiphaë/Kirke1221 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Scorpiohistory


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * scorpiohistory/Pasiphae


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pasiphae

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Good strong lead with a strait forward "hook" that is interesting to the reader, and a broad understanding of subject. The only thing I would say is to agree with you to add a citation to the "witchcraft and sorcery" comment and add a note to it so it can lead to a citation that the reader can follow up on.

Article body: I like how the article flows well and how there are many categories about Pasiphae. To add more contributions I would put in more notes throughout the body and categories so again it gives more opportunity for readers to follow up on and they can then begin their own research. You could also knit pick at the sentence structure or grammar. just to make the article as perfect as it can get at this current moment.

References: I would turn your cited links into full citations, it is easy to do this my inputting your links into the Wikipedia citation maker. If you feel like you need to add more to the article it couldn't hurt to add more citations and references to make other texts for accessible to readers. I would also maybe add a Bibliography to put your citations in.

Overall article review: The article looks great so far! Kirke1221