User:Scott ummel/sandbox

 Police K9 article: 

After reading through the article I can see many factual errors within the details included on the history and use of K9s. Many gramatical errors are also present such as the use of "Police dogs" instead of their actual term used worldwide, Police K9. The article doesn't follow a smooth transition from idea to idea instead making the article very choppy and confusing to read. There are many important aspects of K9s that the original author neglects to discuss such as the rigorous selection process these dogs go through, their training, and interesting Stories about high profile cases they were involved with. the things I would do to improve the article would be: 4-19-17:
 * 1) Review any grammatical errors
 * 2) "fact check" all the information presented
 * 3) determine what to keep or discard from the original article
 * 4) add new information relevant to the article that would interest the reader and inform them more about k9s
 * 5) make the article flow seamlessly from topic to topic improving the overall clarity.

Sources to use while editing article:
 * History; http://www.dogsforlawenforcement.org/police-canines-in-history.html

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