User:ScottyPometta/Accepting the non-binary gender/Charris0524 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ScottyPometta


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Charris0524/Erotic_talk?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Legal recognition of non-binary gender (?)
 * Non-binary gender (?)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Scotty, I am not entirely sure if you are creating an entirely new article or revising one of these articles I've attached above. Either way, I will include some stuff I think would be important for your content.

In the case of article 1: I think it would be a good idea for you to include some of the legal status of intersex people or non-binary people in some more traditional countries. I do not see many African countries included for the legal status, and I do not see any countries that are in the Middle East. I'd imagine I could guess what the legal status is for some of these countries, but I would love to learn about what they are.

In the case of article 2: I think it would be prudent to bolster up the sections about History, Pronouns and Titles, and Discrimination. For history there simply has to be a lot more out there than 4 obscure facts. I'd love to learn more about the rich history of the matter and this section simply does not have enough information. For pronouns I'm sure that there is more to say than just listing the "they, them, theirs" pronouns and the " xe, ze, sie, co, and ey" pronouns. I'd love to learn about why people use the pronouns they do and such. For discrimination, it's similar to history. There is simply too much in history about the discrimination of non-binary people to fit into that small paragraph that exists currently.

In the case of creating your own article, I would love to see what you have/will create and please email me with what you create and I'd be glad to review it and see what you come up with. I think there is definitely a place for an article talking about general societal acceptance of non-binary people.

Regardless of what article you choose to edit or write yourself, I think that this is an exciting topic and I'd love to read what you decide to write or edit!