User:Scout26/Douglas McGregor/Kevinh1000 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
This article features a great lead that reflects the new content added, it is concise and transitions easily into the featured content. The content is both relevant and cited properly. The article is engaging, yet neutral, and has a balanced content per section ratio. Links tested work properly.

Overall, the article is clear and concise, gives a more thorough look at the subject’s life and works, plus a more pleasing visual presentation. The article could be improved by having a more outstanding discussion and explanation of his research.