User:ScrambledLegz/Home care/FrzIce Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ScrambledLegz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ScrambledLegz/Home care - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

you have good details and items that you have found to give more information however you have not organized them yet, I also can't tell if you are making a new article or editing an old article. You seem to have neutral standing with shouldn't be hard, it might be a good thing to add pictures if you can if you are making a new article. besides just adding more info and links into your article and making it more organized, including a lead and body, it should be good for either adding to an article or making a new one.

Response: I did not consider adding a graphic of somesort, while reviewing my peers' work I have seen a few ideas that would work well within the passage. I hope to add more lenght and depth to the article so that I can organize the ideas with subheaders and paragraphs so the information will be easier to break down. Thank you for your feedback!